So my big day came and went. On Tuesday Tom Woodruff came to look at the status of our thesis comics. He was not as mean as he was to other classes. Actually he was pretty nice to us! It was a big shocker to say the least. Anyhow my critique went pretty well. He said my thesis is almost fantastic I just needed to change my characters eyes and hair.
I did a few tests and I think this looks much better then her old hair and eyes.
I'll ask my professor if it is any better. If not I will keep trying until I get it right.